Teacher Feedback on Blog and Pitch

Your pitch was excellent and had a really strong consideration of the mise-en-scene you are hoping to create and you had clearly thought about how to incorporate a variety of shots, which is essential for maintaining the viewers attention. I really like the hide and seek theme to the narrative, it fits perfectly with the song. I do think it is important to incorporate more opportunities for lip synching. It was clear from your pitch that you have done a considerable amount of planning.
Your blog is looking good but there is still room for improvement if your blog is to accurately reflect the grade you currently deserve. You must all upload the Goodwin and Auteur presentations that we did in the first few weeks, include a description of the task before uploading the presentations and don't forget to tag them correctly.
You also need to include some context and analysis of the images you have researched as inspiration for the digipak and magazine ad - what is it you like about them, what are the conventions of these products, what is effective, what doesn't work so well etc?
In addition some visuals to illustrate the props list would further enhance your blog.
It is also really important that your blog illustrates development of your ideas for your digipak and your magazine advert too so you need to sketch out those ideas and blog them too.
Good work so far, keep going.