3. Peer Feedback

Lyrics and Visuals

For a song with limited vocals you have managed to link the lyrics and visuals well especially with the "i'm not finished" written on the music score and where the handle is being turned when it says "struggling to get in". The lip syncing is good but it may look better with a bit at the beginning to introduce the male and female characters. Cutting to the beat is good but slightly off at the start but good throughout.
Lots of different shots, quick changes, good story telling, good costumes and interesting footage.