Editing and review over roughcut

We have completed our rough cut and received some positive feedback. The main thing people pointed out was the lack of lip syncing and the artists aren't featured enough.So we are planning to do another filming session and incorporate some more lip syncing maybe on a new location.
So far we have doen quite well we have the shots we want to use in order and nearly timed right.Now we have to do some more editing and start transitions if necessary and filters so the scenes run smoothly together and aren't to contrasting with colours.
Using the colour corrector in final cut we have changed the tone of a few shots here is one of the ones we have changed.